I thought it was pretty DOPE
First off, easy on the eyes (NICE structure)
Good flow
Decent worplay (could be better) ALWAYS
Lot of multies
Had feeling behind!!
FAV line:
Quote:
They speak in envy probably because jelousy of the life you leed
Portray in your direction your chin up above shoulders an proceed
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work on vocab.
&wordplay
Constantly elevate
Overall DOPE shit from the heart
I' felt it!!
JamesJr.