damn..this was nice..
Sarcasm's verse~yeah..it was okay..but truthfully..it was kind of boring..I wasn't feelin it at all..some good lines..but..I just wasnt feelin it....sorry

Key-Low's verse~I liked yours..it held my attention..I liked it..although your structure could have been a lil better,I still enjoyed the way you put your words together..terrible ending..and I dont mean rap wise,I mean story wise..it was sad..but..it still entertained me..so..my vote goes to Key-Low..