I like your word play in this thread and sharades. Ummm i don't want to sound like EVERY other post i have read but your lines do need to be evened out... if a song style is what you're looking for. I'm really diggin sharades though =P too bad the thread was closed. This one was a little weaker than what i had hoped for, but every page isn't going to be a platinum hit. Personall i'd change up the pumpkin pie line, it just didn't fit witrh the tone of the rest of your work. Lines 5 and 6 were good, work em up a little more though. And i'm glad you see the truth.