Keep up emotion, you did a good job with voacbulary, when you do this
Quote:
I feel so alone and lonely,
underappreciated, abandoned, overlooked, and misunderstood.
(Just like everyone else)
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^^^ It catches the eye, draws readers in. I liked how you did it, and good job only doing it once (literature). Good poem, something others can relate to.
We may battle again later, but I might battle one of my friends, so I might need to keep a battle open. Vote on others battles, ask to return the favor. Karma, yo.
Good drop, keep coming