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Flyweight
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Dope Concept
IP:
Dope concept... goes both ways
had emotion (anger) behind
had multies, good flow, decent structure, (lengthen it)
Definately stayed on topic
I was looking forward for more verses (keep at it)
Work on wordplay, voab. multies
(Just a suggestion)
I'll be looikng for up'd version or audio
JamesJr.
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