good piece ur flow was definetly a great aspect of ur peice
and ur ending was good,but u kind of lost my interest
in the middle, the beggining could have been better
and the structure kind of fucked, but mabey its just diff
computers cuz some guys font isnt the same/shit like that.
not a lot of fuckers respond to ss peices in open mic
but its all g.
ill check this battle out in ss after.

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Aesop.