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til eye u had ok flow, the punches were kinda bland though, didn't really hit hard, and u didn't have many personals, u gotta use more personals. cam u had weak flow, punches were a lil more creative, and u had more personals. cuz of that..vote-cam
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I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey
Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby
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..this was ok, good flow, diss culda been better though
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You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this
I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids
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..flow is a lil off, but the punch is ok.
you kno my vote, so i'm just gonna say both ya'll need to elevate. cuz these verse weren't that good.
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