whoa............incredably dissapointed that i wasted valuable seconds of my life reading that second verse......tha breakdown:

Mad - rhyme scheme- 6.5, story- 8.5, flow- 6.5, total- 21.5

a solid drop from you.......you easily took it, work on rhyme scheme

Defcon- rhyme scheme- 6, story- 2, flow- 6, total- 14

you shouldnt have posted this........sorry man, but this was pointless

vote- obviously mad man, no hard feelins, vote on my ish, peace, 1

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