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IP:
Ive done a similar piece to this...
Sort of different topics though...
This was a good drop... You had nice creativity... Vocabulary... Flow was on through most... Maybe it fell off a couple of times... Nothin really to critisize on this...
A felt that you portrayed the topic nicely with this piece...
Keep it up...
Check out my Open Mics in return please...
Thanks...
Pz...
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