IP:
iight...
You need to sort out your structure... What is the point of //?
None what-so-ever...
Blah...
This piece was iight... Nothin really special... You did have some good concepts and ideas in there though...
Not a bad drop by you...
Jus fix ya structure and maybe flow it abit better...
Hit up my Open Mics in my sig in return please...
Thanks...
Pz...
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