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Old 02-05-04, 04:59 AM   #13
Timeless
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Tight as a virgin, kid. great imaginary peice. flow was ok but not the best but i have a feeling flow aint what you were going for.6/10 style, like i sed before i really like. its different. 9/10 vocab was great and used it well. 8/10 topic, this is what is the best part for me, ya had a topic in mind and wrote it beutifully in text, great stuff. 9 1/2 out of 10. The piece was deep man.

overall, Another good piece by you .:freeman:. keep up the open mics coz their a joy to read. 32 1/2 out of 40
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