Thread: jaime V.s alias
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Old 02-05-04, 10:14 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by jamie
You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo
I'm 2 Low, that funky little brother, yo
Comin back with a brand new cut
And you can new jack swing on my -
Cause I got this here so tight
A young playa doin damage to the mic (you sho' right)
I'm 13, but I ain't dumb
So bring it on if you little bustas want some
Cover your dome because it's on once again
And I'm a young playa that's known to win


What the fuck^?

*sighs*

Why do wack people keep challenging decent people?

Alias takes this for obvious reasons...

He had punches... Flow... Vocab... Opener was good...
As he obviously pre-wrote that as there were no punches... let alone personals... For fuck sake man elevate...

Work on your...

Structure...
Flow...
Vocab...
Punches...
And general writing skills...
Learn how to spell...


A decent verse by Alias...

Jus out weighed the other dude...

v/ Alias

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112267

Pz...