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ittalic
How could u stand tall wen ur letters dont even stand strait?
heavy use of italic is the closest ull get to 'illtalic-weight'...
nice wordplay, 6/10

puttin ya mouth in the gutta dont make u a voice of the streets
im like diligent road workers.. i leave nothin but clean sweeps...
first line played, second, not too bad 5/10

an to impress peeps, i'll even dress ur corpse myself
seems u were warned too late that battlin's bad fa ya health...
badly worded, 5/10

now like early births ur facin a painfully premature departure
cos lines this sharp are sure to start to depart ya...
first line ok, seond vla, 5/10

face facts.. its clear u started off on the wrong leg
crew's listed above The Peasantry.. yet ur the ones who beg...
nice, 7/10

yup.. ull compare me to a child genius.. in a class of my own
cos i 'fathered' this kid wiv 'insults'.. then left him all 'diss-owned'...
not too bad, second line i wasnt feelin, 6/10

followin this ur style an rep now resemble ur avatar
both are negatives that jus got ripped wiv one bar...
wack, filler 4/10

a Brummie mc? please.. id leave u twisted worse than Spaghetti Junction
an teach u more lessons than Jet Li appearin at ur Jujitsu function...
ok, could of been worded better, 6/10

well its over.. im thru.. looks like ur back in December of '86
cos iv slaughtered ur career wiv words swung like double-speed Nix..//
nice try u didn't pull it off too good, 5/10

overall 49/90

freeman
With me your doomed.. You know that 'the threats real'
My verse will leave you breathless...
... Worse than a box wiv an air tight seal
not too bad, 6/10

What a fucking bitch.. Even went over the limit he set
This guy is worse than a ghost writer...
... He's just the silhouette
liked second line, nice personal, 7/10

Your name amuses me.. Suggesting your style of text is ill
Thats a mistake jus like your mom...
... when she didnt take her contraceptive pill
played, 5/10

Im not catchin your illness.. Your only infected wiv HIV
My punches leave you limp and hanging in everyway...
... similar to a Willow Tree
lol, nice meta, 7/10

My style is swift and smooth hitting.. Like a pro golf-stroke
While you admit your a comedian...
... so your style's literally a joke
wity, again nice, 7/10

Your reps slaughtered.. Left you feelin small and diminished
Ive practically made you cry...
... And a havent even finished
not too good, weak, filler, 5/10

Handing you an L regardless.. Dont matter what you say
This merk will be so spectacular...
... that'll RB will demand an action replay
noh, didnt quite work, 4/10

Poppin this idiot.. His head was gettin inflated
Bought you back down to earth...
... And you found out your name's been desecrated
not too bad, 5/10

Snappin this bitch.. finished him as easily as a book
Fishin the alphabet for a W...
... that is something you will never hook
nice wrdplay, 7/10

using italics in the battle, lol

overall 53/90]/b]

my vote [b]freeman