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IP:
Wow... Im impressed...
Timeless that finisher was cool... Could of been worded better... But still the best bar of battle... Props...
Rest of your verse was normal standard for you... Keep it up...
Good flow... Punches... Structure...
Jus dont capital your words... Makes it look ugly... And harder to read... Jus keep it nice n simple until you find your own structure that suits you...
Guess... Dont colour your verse in man... This is not a colouring competition...
You need to elevate...
Dont talk about yourself so much... Attempt punches... Be creative...
Weak verse from you...
v/ Timeless...
Pz...
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