I caught that right when you started with "my favorite color is"

Flow - was alright but needs some work most of your lines were kinda choppy - try finding different ways to say the same thing so your words hit with the rhythm better

Vocab - suited your piece, I haven't seen anything else you've done but I think you might wan'na elevate this. If you type your stuff try using a thesaurus - then if you want to use a word look it up in the dictionary first to make sure you know exactly what it means. Like I said though this work was pretty brutal and primal so your vocab suited it.

Concept - I don't know if you were trying for comedy or for something hardcore but I think it does better as a comic piece.

Overall - 6/10