WOW we got a newb that is pretty good.....timeless nice flow u had good punches and i was feelin that ending.............the break down........
flow:timLess had a good flow fell off track acouple of time byt he fixed it...guess whos back yo u had no good flow u need to find words ta flow with other words better....
punches:TIME u had some nice punches<Guesswhosback u had a couple of good punches but TIME came thru harder with his,u need to elevate just alittle bit
structuer:well guess whos back had good structuer<TIME your was ightt but his was just a little better
PERSONALS:didnt realy see any good personals...
my vote:timeless