Thread: jaime V.s alias
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Old 02-05-04, 01:46 PM   #10
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ite not a very good battle here jamie was up 1st,
your stuff was wak man, you came way to basic and it,
sounded like an open mic piece not a diss...you had no hard punches atall,
also your flow was non exsistent man soz but you gota elavate alot,
007 not the best of verses but i liked your attemp of wittyness here,
punches hit (not to hard) but they did hit here....
also you had a simple but affective structure wich made your verse flow well,
you had the newb personals but i wud inc;ude more here man,
overall not amazing but did the job man nice ............


plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112131 thx alot.......pz