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Old 02-05-04, 02:49 PM   #14
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damn man i got to drop an honest vote here

daffer... you got potential.. but what you need to do is work on your wittiness and punchlines.. your verse had alot of weak wordplay.. i didnt really see any creative punchlines in your verse..i give your verse a 3.5/10

illconceptz- you had alot of nice punchlines and mulites in your verse.. you came really creative.. i mean this battle was one sided.. i felt like you used better wordplay and had better disses than daffer in this battle

vote - ill conceptz
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