fine, heres a better one.. but dont DQ IT!!

punches - btk: his punches came harder than did, liked all his lines but 2nd bar and van gogh line, had a few good ones too, trailer park was off the hook!..

flow - btk: his was just better overall, came off at sometimes when lost it for him..

structure - btk: <--PERFECT! well almost, but was a lil harder to read, nice job btk..

personals - btk: very close, i love personals, but 's werent as good and not as many as btk's..

opener / closer - : closer was off the hook and so was the opener, btk's were pretty good, but not as good..

that better? btk still gets it, nice job..

vote - born to kill

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