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Old 02-05-04, 03:30 PM   #5
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This was pretty decent. Didn't like the rhymes in the first two lines but it was prett cool after that. Edd, ya structure through me off for a sec, but one i got it, it was cool. I thought you verse was pretty nice, aswell. Nice collabo fellas.

My fav lines:
yet the answer to that,is maybe revailed in my own depth..
only im just a fool to comply..
& only see the small ammount that is left..

^pretty ill....the next lines after this are ill too

Please reurn the favor when you guys get a chance:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112020
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