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Old 02-05-04, 04:06 PM   #36
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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From: GhEtTo
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Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill
Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill
pretty weak, multis are useless unless you have a creative punch/personal/meta in there too
I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide
where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind
I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine
ehh ok
But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air
You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care?
Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair
But i'm just wondering what does she wear?
whack
This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta
Bet he sounds like real disasta
Haven't got the skills to write fasta
weak
You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta
Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta
played
I really think this masta shud blow a dick
He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit
Don't have to think about givin me a lick
Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick
[b]played



The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim,
weak, this aint audio, dun throe fake punches, you can't hear what he sounds like
u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd,
just coz they all reject you, but not me,
callin yaself gay? Whack line
Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair,
makes u a relation to frankesteins creation,
blah
so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead,
by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead,
weak
Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together,
afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever,
This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim,
but just like the chocolates, he aint yum,
ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn,
im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn?
weak whack crack attack

Daffer takes this battle. Both should check out the whackness emergency center for useful battle tips. Daffer, you had a few ok lines. Stay away from all gay/fag/homo etc lines cause they are mad played and worthless in battles nowadays. Rappin try and be more creative in your rhymes. Also try and even out your flow. Vote-Daffer

Pleasee return the favor and drop an honest vote here. I took the time for you guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 Thanks