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Smilie
born to kill your a hick... so what are you doing holding a SET A MICS?
with over 200 battles on this board its obvious you need to GET A LIFE
Hmm... This is a played punch used on Born frequently... Sort of a nice flip though... 6/10
how the hell you always on the net kid do you even have a JOB
or is all you do sit on your ass.. battle kids and get DR votes and SLOB KNOBS?
Once again... Played... Didnt really hit hard? 5/10
seen your family pics on member pictures and kid youll always play the FAILURES PART
i mean gosh dang i aint know they got computers now in TRAILOR PARKS
Ive seen those pictures aswell... He has a very nice home... Lol... Rich sod... So that wasnt a very good punch... And his daughter is cute... Lol... 5/10
kid your lack of incomes ALARMING
i mean dudes so poor even the rats that live in your house are STARVING
Pretty decent... Best bar so far... 7/10
kid behind the internet persona your a REAL WUSSY
your raps are like "tampons" cuz they just "FEEL PUSSY"
Lol... Pretty decent again... 7/10
this battles no COMPETITION, ill kick your ass with STRONG PRECISION
your lyrical skills are like those weapons of mass destruction their NON EXISTENT
A very slim rhyme there...  ... Nice flip on the WOMD thing... Decent closer... 7/10
Overall... 37/60
A decent verse here... Hmm... Wasnt realy feeling it... As usual... You always CAPITAL YOUR FUCKING MULTIS... Dont... Holy shit man... How many times... Lol... It throws the flow in my opinion... Your verses would be much better without it... Structure is standard... Multi's are good as usual... Punches were there... Didnt hit as hard as they could of... Personals... Well... Only hit on his age... Yet you kept calling him 'kid'... Which sort of took the edge off them... Decent verse... Pz...
[b]Born To Kill
Morph his mood, when I show everyone Smiley's a bore...
Cuz like not hittin shift, this kid won't be smiling no more.
Nice wordplay... Good personal... Tight opener... 8/10
;0 Mouth wide with shock, and a fucked up eye from punches...
But keeps his hair hidden, don't want ya ta see tha scrunches.
Lol... Refering to the hair bobble things im guessing... Witty... 7/10
Cuz he's nothin but a bitch, in fact, the whole damn while...
I fucked him with this verse, he just kept giving me that smile.
This bar was extended too much... It was only meant to be one line... But you stretched it into two... Hmm... 5/10
So forget changing him/her whatever, I'm not even sure of ya sex...
But I'm sure ya ain't gettin any, cept the rapings you get in text.
Dope... 9/10
Smiley oughta try audio, perhaps there he'll finally find flow...
Cuz tha kid's got an ear for music, cept his is like Van Gogh's.
Gogh is pronounced 'Goff' over here... We are wierd... Lol... But yea... Nice concept on this punch... 6/10
Smiley's totally gay, gets so happy when his mouth an cock play...
But look, mom was right, he didn't cut it out, so his face froze that way!
Nice multi... Good punch... Can remember when a was little and was told that... Lol... 7/10
Overall... 42/60
Flow was on as usual... Just fell off on that one bar in the middle of the verse a felt... Structure was standard... Punches were very good... Personals throughout... All about his face... Lol... Was feelin this verse... Pz...
v/ Born To Kill...
Better punches... Better personals... That is what wins battles... Pz...
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