Very dope little piece...

I'm so fucking funny...I called it a little piece...little font, little piece! Get it!!!

But this was good.

The first stanza was, in my opinion, more poetic...
The rhyme scheme was a bit off for rap.
But it was really nice.

The 2nd and last stanzas are definately more rap.
I saw ya rhyme scheme fall into place...

Good imagery, kinda felt the emotion lacked even though ya kinda touched on it.

I'd have liked to know why you liked the sky so much aside from it's outward beauty...

Did you share the sky with someone, is that where you pray to, looking upward?

Shit like that would have been some nice background info...

But all around, this was pretty flawless for what it was...

A short, deep piece about The Sky.

Peace

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