Gotta say Skiddz as well...

I think they both had the same message...

Bad government...bad representation of it, bad feelings toward it...

But, I think Skidzz is trying to encourage the depressed troops in his, let em know that Michael Moore and Matrin Sheen suck...
While NLitEnd is only speaking his mind to us.

I thought that added a nice twist to the story.

NLitEnd definately had the structure and format here...good flow off of it.

So, I'm picking story and nice twist over the flow...

Cuz I really think complexity, vocab, meaning, emotion...

Were all even.

I liked the topic and direction Skiddz took his in better.

Good from both though...

Peace

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