wow man..you are gettin better..this was a very touchy subject & it could be whatever you wanted it to be if you put your heart into it..and you obviously did that..the CAPS put a lot of emotion into what you were trying to make a point...the flow was very good...& i think you should do more topics like these...your defintely becoming very good at these touchy topics & i expect a lot more to come in the future...nice work