Weak Battle
hardhitter i found it really ironic that the line in the beginning when you were talking about biting:if u ever post a bittin rhyme im gunna beat u till your fuckin bones poke thru your skin!......was the line that u bit 80% of eminem's song role model..that was the dumbest thing i ever seen anyone do...so obviously your gonna lose points for that, but moving on....

Flow:Both of you really need to work on your flows...your verses were hard too read but if i had to choose a someone it would be hardhitter.....he had a slightly better flow excluding the line he bit off eminem..habitat your flow wasn't that bad but you really need to work on it..your rhymes are just cluttered up together try too even things out and you will do better..

Punches:Hardhitter had the better punches(excluding the line he bit off eminem), his rhymes were wittier, but the flow of the verse made it hard too understand..Habitat your punches weren't far away from hardz but u just gotta be more direct if your verse was like these lines:Yo ur just a big freak show and all ur rhymes are wack why u think i was sent here to attack cause wat i have is wat u lack so maybe u can start bitin my rhymes and get on the right track..... then u would've won

Structure:Both of you had whack structures, i mean i didn't know where every other line started or ended....like i said before you gotta make shit evenly so you gotta better flow and better structure don't just spit 1 line put this shit "/" and type someshit right after it....
for example:
Yo ur just a big freak show and all ur rhymes are wack why u think i was sent here to attack cause wat i have is wat u lack
so maybe u can start bitin my rhymes and get on the right track.

its much easier too understand if your spit a line..press enter and go on too the next bar.so its something like this to make it more clear

1.xxxxxx
2.xxxxxx
3.xxxxxx
4.xxxxxx
and so one
Im not gonna add in more topics like vocab and personals...u guyz should elevate more..i hope i've given you enough info..
vote:hardhitter
hit this battle up and vote honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112322