Full BreakDown
Baz's Verse
Blah Blah Blah Blah, whats ur name?,/
ur giving me narcolepsy,, cos all ur shit sound the same,/
* Played Line ( Name/Same) starting with Blah Blah don't help your cause either 5/10
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, sorry about that,, shit,/
im about to Lenox Lewis ur world,, swing-and-hit,/
* Once again pretty basic , 1 full bar of your first 2 verses is ZZZZZZZ and Blah Blah , Don't work for me ... 5/10
now u out cold,, n i aint even through with this ryhme,/
count to ten,, ding,, ding,, now this battle is mine,/
* Little more Creative but nothing special 6/10
now the doctor rushes to u,, u like help me,, please,/
that nigga 187,, got me down on my knee's,/
* Please/Knees ? you need some Multi's to juice up your shit 5/10
now like mike tyson,, im ready to bite,/
games up niggateen,, its over aiight,
* Closer is Weak , Tyson and Biting is way overplayed and dull
5.5/10
26.5/50 53%
Niggateens Verse
Baz?...tell me, what the hell does that name mean?...
Beating off to Ass pics out of a Gay 'Zine?...
(LMAO - Pretty creative opener , dug it 9/10)
You see a career in the future? Well, i dont see shit...
The bottom must have fallen out like Janet Jackson's Tit...
(Nice Followup , mini personal , 8/10 )
Well "dog", this battles over, i already see the red fern...
you're passed your prime, so turn around, i think you missed the turn...
(Decent , good flow , but nothing too ill here 7/10 )
You want to elevate, but it just dont work, like toy helicopters...
You probably bite, to you good battlers are just like teliprompters...
(Nice Rythme work .......Never heard Helicopters used before 8/10)
Give it up, this is the brutal end to your little fairy tale...
your finished, go to Ebay and put your computer up for sale...
(Good Closer , nice ripping , coo 8.5/10)
40.5/50 81%
I broke it down and it looks like Niggateen wins on all cylinders , no hate to Baz ...you got decent flow , yu just got to up your gameplan a bit and try to elevate and keep your head up , and don't give up , keep trying , you'll figure it out .....
Peace to All
CrazyE
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