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Old 02-05-04, 08:34 PM   #20
.Iknoevel.
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Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
decent opening... if u had worded it better it woulda hit harder
Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
good punch..very creative the way u used the concept and i was feelin it alot
You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
no rhyme...1st line was a shit personal and 2nd line had no punch
I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
so-so punch...not that great
Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
not feelin the rhyme again.. and the not a good punch either
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
again..not a good punch...played concept and wasnt good
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .
stretched last line...it was just an ok ending


Ill

Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
not really a hard punch...just an ok opening
Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
decent personal in the first line and 2nd line was good
Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
not bad wordplay here...punch wasnt bad either
Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
good punch...
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
me 2 Ill, me 2, u wanna be my friend Form?
"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
another decent personal and hitting punch
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack
good closer to finish it off


overall - ILL took this battle..he was more consistent with hard punches... Form u had that one dope punch wit father and son, and that was basically it..ill kept decent and good punches through out...looks like another easy no effort win for ill

V/ Ill
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