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Old 02-05-04, 08:54 PM   #10
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ew...

pretty bad battle guys...

hardhitter...u need some work..alot of work...u got the basics of a battle down..u used personals on him..but ur rhymes are barely even there....I saw a lot of lines that didn't rhyme with anything, and the ones that did rhyme, were real basic...u also used small vocab...


habitat...ur verse was severely basic..no vocab....no punches....weak disses...personals weren't really personal....nothing was really good about ur verse..it was structured really bad...u mispelled the word "glock"...you fucking posted again because you "forgot to add some lines"....that's fucking stupid...


vote- Hardhitter...

although the battle was really weak, it's academic...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...911#post1159911
^ needs votes
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