Here's how I saw this one.

Flow=Blak, his flow was much better, it was an easier read and just flowed better over all. Mel, you need to work on your flow a bit, it was kind of messed up.

Punches=Blak, his punches hit harder and were more creative. Mel, you mostly did gangster rap stuff which doesn't really win battles, you have to be creative in a battle not just talk about killing the other guy.

Personals=Blak, his personals were better, I didn't see any real good personals from either, but Blak's were better over all. You should both work on personals some, just because good personals can win you a battle.

Vocab=Tie, you both had some okay vocab in there. You both could still elevate in this area but over all it was pretty good.

Over all=Blak, you had a pretty nice verse, you had good punches, personals, vocab, and flow, you can still get better in all of those areas but for the most part it was pretty good, I'd say you should work on your flow the most, it was a bit off.
Mel, You seemed to focus on gangster rap type of stuff, you need to work on throwing punches, and personals that will make people think it's funny, you know witty type of stuff, and you should work on your flow, it was kind of off, your vocab was probably your best area.

Vote=Blak

Hey, vote on my battles, I took time on your battle just return the favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
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