Breakdown:
Kid
Punches: 4/10
Flow: 6/10
Multies: 2/10
Personals:5/10
Metas: 4/10
Structure: 3/10 (work on it)
Total:24/60
one of your lines said he gives you an erection which made me not want to read the rest of it, 'nough said
X
Flow: 6/10
Punches:6/10
Multies:7/10
Metas:5/10
Personals: 5/10
Structure: 4.5/10
Total:33.5 (if the math is done correctly, it's still enough to beat kid)
You had a pretty good verse nothin' special or amazing, but at least you didn't subliminally say you were gay...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112201 You guys know what to do...