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IP:
Impressive piece i thought...the concept on this was great...i've never seen this done before. Well done. The rhyme scheme I liked. Seemed like a poem the way this was presented but none the less was a great work of art. Your vocab was good multies were good. Ovwer all this was a great piece i really enjoyed this read probably one of the best this month....peace
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