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Weezy Snypz
Listen... Ya rhymes out of date so they gettin' expired/
Your Words couldn't get hot if I set 'em on fire/
Call me dragon only thing that im Spittin' is flames/
This cat should lose, For the simple fact "THING" is his name/
out of commission my punchlines should be call knock out lines/
one personal hit 'em hard put him out for some time/
yeah i know 0-3 my record isnt the best/
But you wouldn't know you was speakin' bull if it took a shit on your chest/
You in the worst state your plot is thickenin' quick/
you'll pack in a casket like a box of chicken wings/ HOLD DAT!!!(sike)
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...SMH...
Sup with that old style?
Flow was decent
Punches was weak
Personals hit softly...
Wordplay .. there wasnt much...
Overall.......10/20
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Thing
You Say Your From "Where Ever You Not From...But Why
Shits So Incohearent That You Should Just Simply Die
Kid Trys To Make His Verse Look Better By Adding A "/"
But Thats As Herbish As Thinking You Could Win A Thing
I'mma Disinagrate Ya Roots From the Herb Garden Then Sing
So Now When You Try To Survive You Wont Cuz No Soil
Your Worst Than A Rich Famalies Daughter...So Spoiled
This Horrible Addtrosaty Hasent Even Won A Single Battle
And This Fact Literally Stays The Same As I Complete My Bar
Your Verse Had The Consistancy Of Uglyness Just Like Tar
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...Better...
Punches were decent
Flow was good
Personals were decent
Wordplay was lacked
Structure was better...
Overall......13/20
V/Thing
Came harder
Did better
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