This was nice. The story was pretty decent. It was an easy read. Flowed nice. I liked the first verse alot better than the second. The secon was still decent though.

you get hit on a lot
For some reason i started laughing as soon as i read this

I discovered the tru power of friends
This also made me laugh. Just seems like something that purple dinosour would say

Anyway, nice piece.
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