Breakdown:
Mario
Punches: 5/10
flow:4/10
Multies:2/10
Metas:3/10
Personals:3/10
Structure: 4/10 (work on that)
Total: 21
Pnemonia boy
Punches: 6/10
Flow: 6/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 2/10
Personals: 3/10
Structure:6/10
Total:28/60
Numbers don't lie, pretty weak battle overall, but pnemonia boy's finisher was tight, but you weren't consistant with 'em so one punch couldn't sway the whole category...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112201 You guys know what to do...
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