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Old 02-06-04, 12:56 AM   #14
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Cam Rok.. ?? Hold On Lemmie Waste This Line
Laughed So Hard I Nearly Forgot To Rhyme
What The Hell You Sucha Biter You Bit Ya Name
Wait It's CamRon Your Just That Close To Fame
weak 2 bars, no real good punches or personals
I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey
Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby
Wait You Don't Even Speak That.. It's Worse
You Talk Shit That Is Lookin Lyrically Cursed
whack....you mentioned a furby in a battll...tsk..tsk
Bitch More Predicted Then Volcanoes To Burst
And Ya So Dispicable That Ya Need To B Dispursed
Destroyed.... Bitch Ya Out Of This System
You Swinging Strikes Faster Then You Could Miss'em
weak
Yeah Im Asian To Let You Know Me Idol Is Jin
This Bitch Has To Be White He Has Em In His Sig
weak closer. Check Whackness Emergency Center man for battle tips



Little Asian, straight out the alleys of the Hong Kong hood
Zero chance of winning, same chance any Dynasty Soldier could
Blah...played
If this cat gets a vote, I'm sorry, it's been rided
Keepin pride, this guided missile, make this battle lop-sided
Better open ur Eye-lids, cause I'm straight merkin you son
Each line, like a 200 ton bomb dropin on you as you run
kinda weak, but ok
This rhymes a pile of quick sand, better keep your feet up
Can't get away, same way ur wife wants a pre-nup
You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this
I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids
weak
Listen to this shit, ever hear a japanese crack whore rap?
He doesn't make sense, not consistent, talking backwards laps
Till-Eye-Die, what the hell is that supposed to mean
I'm shittin on ur azn pride, time to die, oops just made ur eyes bleed
decent

Camrock took this battle, TED didn't really come with anything creative, no real good punches or personals. Cam cam alright, some played Asian jokes..but he did slip a few good punches in there. Both could work on being more original and creative in their punches/personals/metas. Vote- Cam

Honest votes here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337