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Flyweight
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decent, dunno bout a deal
IP:
It had good structure,(might wanna take those ugly // of the end of eachline)
good multies, (try to make em bigger more relating,)
decent vocab (work on it)
good flow (you could lengthen em)
Always elevate
I ALWAYS read alot , it HELPS!!
JamesJr.
I dunno if you're gonna get a deal
(yet atleast)
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