Thread: Dev vs OutCome
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Old 02-06-04, 05:40 AM   #7
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Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh

now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down...

Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation
So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation?
First line is good, second is mad played
Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag
Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag
played and whack
Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty
Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty
I swear of heard the 1st line before....Bit? Nah I'll trust you but its played already
I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
ok
What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit
Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs
ehh played, but ok

wicky whooooooa



So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet!
hmmm ok I suppose
And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat
but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat!
ok
So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap
You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak!
lol..hehe kinda played but I laughed
And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
nice
OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag
In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had!
played

I think Dev pulled this one out. He was more creative in his punches. Out some of ya lines were stretched and lose the bold dawg. ALso try and be more creative and original with your punches/personals/metas. Dev you had some ok personals and punches. Good battle guys.

Please hit these links up or jus one lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459 v. freeza in frontlines
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 v. lilbreeze in frontlines
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157 v. $pit in elevated