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Old 02-06-04, 06:39 AM   #6
Pariah
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jamie vs. The-Marvel-Arm

IP:

[B]Flow[/B] - Marvel-Arm had decent flow and strucutre, which
Jamie's seriously lacked.
Punches- Marvel-Arm also took him here. While his punches
were played and kinda weak, they were enough to do
the job. Jamie attempted to use punches but they
were too simple and were very weak.
Personals- Due to the fact that Jamie had no personals, Marvel- Arm gets it.He Had two personal, although weak,
about J's age and that he's a student.
Vocab-Nothing special here pretty basic from both
[B]Creativity[/B]- Not much creativity in this one, but I'd have to say
that Marvel came more creative.
Overall- No much of a battle. Jamie needs to seriously work
on using punches and personals. As well as his vocab
and structure. Marvel-Arm had decent flow and
structure, but needs to be a little more creative in his
vocab and punches. I can't officially vote, but If
I could I would have to vote: Marvel- Arm

Vote on these fuckin' battles:

apathy vs. Gravity
apathy vs. jamie
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