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Old 02-06-04, 06:49 AM   #6
Dev
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This mad hatter foo thinks he is gonna beat me down
Sad thing is, he's gonna go home with a frown
^^weak opener...should be strong to start it off
I'm leery of lyric after he pussed out on a pink slip
I guess he was afraid he'd be forever limp dicked
^^abit played, put not bad personal
He says he's the vet,
maybe, but I think he's all wet
^^played, cos i used something similar before..lol..bad structure
this pre cum chumb better study up,
or his ego is gonna deflate just like his jockie cup
^^quite weak
I'm gonna injure his pride
Lyric, you're gonna wish you'd died!
^^weak, and too short... bad closer


Freeza burn cause the shit you spits whack like your lines
If you spit like this Do I even need to fuckin try?
^^ok personal
I asked for a pinkslip battle, but your ass pussied out
This was your answer Hehe whos the lil bitch now?
^^who dropped out??... but it was another ok personal, bit weak for a punch
Fuckin bitch, Dun ever think you can fuck with me at all
My personals are low blows, but you dun have any balls
^^funny punch... not bad
Cause I know ya a girl, form ya last battle, it was whack
My first line was enough to merk your whole fuckin act
^^a bit played, but not a bad punch
The fuck you think you are, Jus anutha wannabe white bitch
Dun think that we're friends, cause like diareah your whack shit
^^again quite funny... average closer


all in all lyric's verse was harder hittin and the flow and structure made it an easier,,, althought mainly its the punches i vote on...so...vote=lyric
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