Thread: Dev vs OutCome
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Old 02-06-04, 08:02 AM   #8
Pariah
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Dev vs. Outcome

IP:

Outcome:

Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh

now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down...

Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation
So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation?
Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag
Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag
Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty
Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty
I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit
Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs

wicky whooooooa

Flow- Had good flow and structure
Personals/Punches- Some good personals and punches.A Few punches
were a little played though.
Vocab- decent vocab, it gets the job done.
Creativity- I liked the creativity with the personals ( hemispherses,
wits-end). The masterbation punch was played out as well as the
pre-writs line, but they were worded well so it worked.

Dev:

So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet!
And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat
but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat!
So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap
You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak!
And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag
In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had!

Flow- Also had good flow and structure
Personals/Punches- I liked personal about the 'seed', but I thought
that the first line was a little played. Some good
punches here, especially liked the 6 & 7th line and
and the closer.
Vocab- Decent, but again it flows good so it works
Creativity- Pretty good, some nice personals and punches,a few lines
a little played but still a good job


I felt that this was a pretty close battle. Both showed good flow and structure as well as some creativity. While there some good personals and punches, I just felt that Dev's hit harder.I cant officially vote( not enough post) but I would give my vote to: Dev

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