U aint unloved at least not by me, even though I don't know you heh...This wasn't bad but Id say it would do better in the poetry section, I mean this topic is way overdone (if you spittin about real shit thats aite thou), the structure was alright although the flow wasnt always good, throw in some multis to elaborate your piece and try to elevate your vocab a lil 6/10

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