Wow another Rap Battles virgin to torment, how exciting...
You wanna' fuck wit' me but suffer from performance anxiety...
alright opening.. the punchs could have come off a little better.. um thought you had a dope follow through metaphor
Decidedly, you should abort this battle you know you lost it...
Truth is you couldn't flow if you were poured from a faucet...
follow through is kind of basic, on metaphor and punch
You're a closet, homosexual torn from my caustic rhyme pages...
I'm glad we're battlin' textual because your wackness is contagious...
follow through is played..set is weak
Phrases like 'spacious' come to mind when refering to the spaces...
Not only in your rhymes, but the spot where your brain is...
good line, nice connection to lines...over all this was a good bar
Or was, because honestly I can't pretend that I didn't notice...
It's just that your so porous that I had to let you know this...
good attemp at keeping flow but came off rugged.. the punch here wasnt much i thought
All said and done I hope that you continue to write...
Seriously though, you're toy, I was just being polite!
nice ending.. not bad. punch isnt much over all..


Niggas in the church say: kill whitey all night long. . . . the white man is the devil. . . . the CRIPS and Bloods are soldiers I'm recruiting with no dispute; drive-by shooting on this white genetic mutant. . . .
i see your ending follow through concept,but most the set up was just filler type ish.. didnt get to the point of Hey im dissing you
let's go and kill some rednecks. . . . Menace Clan ain't afraid. . . . I got the .380; the homies think I'm crazy because I shot a white baby; I said; I said; I said: kill whitey all night long. . . .
wtf kind of bar is that? you shot a baby? nigga thats just mean.......not feeling that honestly.. truthfully i almsot didntvote on this battle because of the racism....
a nigga dumping on your white ass; fuck this rap shit, nigga, I'm gonna blast. . . . I beat a white boy to the motherfucking ground. . . .This nigga, i ain't never made a sound. . .
alot better than the last bar.. for real that fucking section was fucked.. a baby dog.. thas future.. thas fucked....this was alright.. didnt do much of dissing..
think you can beat me, shit, ill kill all you fools, im like a nigga been takin E's. . .hey Apathy. . .u hear me, your name sound like it just come from a chemist. . .shit im just playin you fool, yeah i said you waz cool. . .
ending flows off it seems.. lacked punchs and metaphors i thought..

Over all, WTF was up with the baby line and kill whittie ish nigga? I mean duke, come on, this int fucking rodney king.. your verse lacked on punchs that were directed.. your lines didnt diss him enough.. Metaphros could be workd on but focus on writing punchlines..

vote= apathy
came with a better style ithough, more punchs hand nice metaphor to top it off

oNe

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