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Very close battle...

I'm a have ta break it down bar by bar and see how many were better...

YOUNG P
Saying you fell off is an understatement, you more idle or dead.
Feebs got you the closest to dope...when he titled this thread!
BRIX
P's against played Negligée lines..Innevitable it was gonna happen
his Rhymes reflect his Dress sense..they both follow a Horrible Pattern
Played opener for Young, seen this recycled time after time...But, I thought Brix's was a reach and a miss with the wordplay, so the punch died for me...Despite being played, Young P
YOUNG P
Only ever capitilized...his punches...but I guess a vet would...
Think that B became wack...I'd say that he never was good!
BRIX
to say Young Pre-writes gets me Laughin..this maggot can't de-Bate
i gave him 50 hrs to Spit & in return..* Uh oh....Two Minutes late!
Gonna say that was a pretty mild punch by Young, Brix takes this with the personal, even thought the punch wasn't much here either...Brix
YOUNG P
Brix is nice though, at making excuses for skill that he lacks.
Fell down a hill tryna catcha' flow...and he still isn't far from Jack!
BRIX
he's a strong believer in Fate..thats why he's already signed out
Proudly says "Brix is Cool"..now the chump thinks he's in w/ a Shout
Just didn't grasp what Brix was tryin ta say here,and how's it a punch? Decent wordplay from Young on a slightly played but nicely twisted concept...Young P
YOUNG P
Honestly, I'm not tryna hate on you B, as a matter of fact...
I said "Brix is cool "...It's Webster that defines you as wack!
BRIX
constantly throws names About..coz he's so embaressed by his own
when Young says he's in the Zone..he refers to being Home Alone
Much better shot and wordplay utilized by Young P, Home Alone is probably 10 years old, this was funny, but real eh as far as punching power goes...Young P
YOUNG P
And fuck my pic, call me a bitch, you'll just get mothered on the spot.
Use New 2 Rb as a reason for losing, (...room for any others you got...)
BRIX
on the other end of his Sitters Fone..using methods to get some Nookie
wot RB’s about to find out..
………….. ..it’s a retards way..of asking for some Milk & Cookies
Better wordplay again by Young P, inventive punch...Brix, that line coulda been so much better if ya'd not stretched it out and added so much filler...Young P
YOUNG P
You're known as a slut to all of RB, fucked, whored and prostituted.
Concepts arent bad mate...I just used them months before you did!
BRIX
P’ll damn sure be Lucky!! Like trying to Hanstand in Kwik Sand
P’s dreams Fade head first.. like the disabled Rides at Disneyland
Again, the wordplay takes this over the metas, nice personal as well by, Young P
YOUNG P
Asked me to fuck you, put it in your sig, you know this fag's foul.
A quick verse? Here's some time...for you to go 'n pack your bags now!
BRIX
So fuck off to Florida..take a Vacation..blow your Social Allowance
your family bringing in a Steady Income..is like a Flidimi tryin to balance
Didn't think that was much of a punch by Young, Brix hit the personals and had a nice meta that gave him the closer...Brix

So...check it out...
Who won more lines?

Looks like Young P did...

There's ya winner.

Peace