Carsonjet, dawg you sound like you spittin with ya momz in the next room. Get tough with that shit. You need a mad up in your delivery, cause ya rhymes may be a lil outdated and reminicent to after school specials (don't be a fool..stay in school!). Concept was nice, if you woulda took your time and memorized that,instead of reading it to the beat, you woulda came out better

Same for d-dub, but he came a lil bit tuffa, so that made the difference for me...Some of the punches are corny, but...nice effort

Vote=dw.