mENTILL I SEE YOUR PROGRESSING IN YOUR WRITING DAILY..I LIKED this piece alot kinda showed the truth in history from the inside not just looking out...The ending was cool because it shows how Jesus Christ went through similar persicution as a man.I always think why would he give his life for me...nothing i've done in the past is deserving of such a gift...and sadly we continue to sin and hate...Im glad you wrote this because the lack of feeling and perception this site has is really sad and at times makes me want to stop the keys from moving...The imagery of the slavery and wheat fields was awesome...just over all a nice piece...great job

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