Evolve went at this with a very unique prospective...
Inside the motherfucking womb...
And twins at that.
Very unique, very creative, very close to ultra mega dope.
But then ya go and hop on the bandwagon of what appears to be the "latest craze" at RB...
"Momma was abused and I had to watch it or know about it or whatever"
So...
That brought the rhyme down very much to me...
But, the perspective was still pretty amazing.

Sureal hit nicely, but I've never been that big of a fan of his format...
I''d argue that that isn't rap at all, it's poetry, but whatever.
His point was a good one, good meaning.
But not much else besides pity is brought to the table...
Poor guy has cancer. Ok. So what.
You didn't mention a family, a lover, a passion in your life like writing, or anything that you'd miss.
I felt you came up way short on emotion.
I felt nothing for this guy, I'm sorry.

Peace

Winner: Evolve

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