This was a good read. Very easy to follw. Great flow. Great imagery. This was pretty ill. I've never read you before, but after this, I'll watch for you.

"The Sun collides with the horizon"-illness


"A mingled mass.. Shining array of pin-holes in the canvas of the sky"-the best line. That imagery is incredible. This line was crazy.

Keep up the good work.

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