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IP:
iight...
A liked this piece... It was quite good... Havent been in the poetry section... So a didnt know how good you were...
Im sort of impressed... Pretty decent verse... Short and Sweet...
You maybe have been doing poetry for too long... As your rhyme scheme is a little bit off...
The only things that you need to work on are...
Rhyme scheme...
Vocabulary...
Thats it... Decent drop...
Keep it up!!!
Hit up 'The Sky'... Please... Thanks...
Pz...
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