This was ill. I love the emotion that you show in this. The flow is great. Very easy read. Very enjoyable read as well.

"thirty minutes of lust"-Holla at me, ma. I got stamina

But in al seriousness, this was an ill drop

"Breathe in every chance that hope is a memory, slowly fading from glance,
Endless tears eat at my soul, dignity dying, to a deep, darker hole,"-the illest part. I love the feeling in these lines.

I don't know why people are sleeping, but nice shit. Keep up the good work.

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